villanelle:

- sembilan belas baris

- 5 stanza tiap stanza 3 baris, kemudian 1 stanza akhir 4 baris

- baris pertama di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza kedua dan keempat

- baris terakhir di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza ketiga dan kelima

- dua baris “chorus” ini jadi baris kedua dari terakhir dan baris terakhir dari tiap villanelle

- rima aba. diulang sesuai akhir rima baris “chorus” <— ini buat yang supernerd



villainelle, un

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make compost out of burning leaves

i’ve been trying to write poetry and failing

life should be like that

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we all listen to the rumble of chariots

the empathy of burning windows

make compost out of burning leaves

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no-mind in hyper-intellectual tzu-jan

i eat capitalism for breakfast

life should be like that

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i need an extra n to spell out your name on wordfeud

places get displaced in memories

make compost out of burning leaves

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an addiction to delayed pleasures?

giant eels careening in overtly familiar territory

life should be like that

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this is useless

semacam keheningan yang dipaksakan

make compost out of burning leaves

life should be like that