villanelle:
- sembilan belas baris
- 5 stanza tiap stanza 3 baris, kemudian 1 stanza akhir 4 baris
- baris pertama di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza kedua dan keempat
- baris terakhir di stanza pertama diulang jadi baris terakhir di stanza ketiga dan kelima
- dua baris “chorus” ini jadi baris kedua dari terakhir dan baris terakhir dari tiap villanelle
- rima aba. diulang sesuai akhir rima baris “chorus” <— ini buat yang supernerd
villainelle, un
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make compost out of burning leaves
i’ve been trying to write poetry and failing
life should be like that
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we all listen to the rumble of chariots
the empathy of burning windows
make compost out of burning leaves
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no-mind in hyper-intellectual tzu-jan
i eat capitalism for breakfast
life should be like that
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i need an extra n to spell out your name on wordfeud
places get displaced in memories
make compost out of burning leaves
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an addiction to delayed pleasures?
giant eels careening in overtly familiar territory
life should be like that
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this is useless
semacam keheningan yang dipaksakan
make compost out of burning leaves
life should be like that